Talk:Independent living

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I don't understand why the tone of this article is inappropriate for wikipedia. This is a simple straightforward explanation of the discrimination faced by people with disabilities and what the IL movement is all about.

i don't know about the tone, but the writing is atrocious. the second paragraph consists of two sentences. one of 41 words and one of 52 words.Toyokuni3 (talk) 20:16, 6 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]