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| Submission declined on 26 November 2024 by TheBirdsShedTears (talk). Certain sections such as Life, career, and research focus, contain overlapping details and repetitive mentions of institutions and unnecessary capitalisation. This redundancy, combined with the overly structured and uniform tone, gives the impression that the content may have been LLM-generated. I recommend thoroughly rewriting these sections to streamline the content, eliminate redundancies, and ensure it adheres to standards for clarity, neutrality, and verifiability. For further assistance, please visit and ask questions at Wikipedia:Teahouse, a very friendly project for new users.
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Comment: It looks better than before. However, in Wikipedia terms, the subject is not referred to by their full name or title such as "professor" or "Dr." after the initial mention. For example, instead of "Dr. Antebi", "Adam Antebi", or "Dr. Antebi", please use either the first or last name. Also, please ensure the tone is neutral and encyclopedic. To better understand how write a good article, please review similar examples in this category. One editing is done, please leave me a message on my tp. TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 16:07, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Seems potentially notable per this. Please see WP:MOSLINK, guidance on how to build Internal links, MOS:CAPS, guidance on how to avoids unnecessary capitalization, and WP:NPOV, guidance on how to write articles with neutral point of view. Converted Max Planck Institute for Biology of Ageing to Max Planck Institute for Biology of Ageing to specify how to build Internal links. TheBirdsShedTears (talk) 16:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
Adam Antebi (born 1961) is an American-born molecular biologist performing research on fundamental mechanisms underlying the processes of aging and longevity.[1] He currently serves as a director of the Max Planck Institute for Biology of Ageing in Cologne, Germany.[2] Antebi is recognized for his pioneering research on the molecular mechanisms regulating life span, particularly in model organisms such as C. elegans and the turquoise killifish.
- ^ "Antebi, Adam". www.mpg.de. Retrieved 2024-11-23.
- ^ "Prof., Dr. Adam Antebi". www.age.mpg.de. Retrieved 2024-11-23.